Wednesday 18 December 2013

Improvements

I have moved groups now as we thought I would work better with my new group.
This is their first cut:


The improvements for their first cut are:
-To include a shot reverse shot(over the shoulder)
-To include match on action
-The 180 degree rule was broken at 00:00:51
-More varied angles need to be used
-The framing needs improving. In one scene the top of her head was cut off and so was her chin.

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