Continuity Task - First Cut

This is our first attempt at our continuity editing task. We are going to have to film another one as there are quite a few improvments we need to make. In our extreme close up, which was the establishing shot  we didn't focus on one part of the head and also we cut off the top of her head in the shot after that. We also didn't include any match on action and our shot reverse shot wasn't done to the best of our ability. These are the main things we are going to have to focus on when we re film it. It is important that we pick out our weaknesses now as when it comes to making the real thing we have had practice and we know what we need improve on.